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Exploring Similes: Meaning, Classic Examples and Helpful Tips
Similes can make your writing more fun and impressive while maintaining clarity. It makes your descriptions more concrete and evocative, allowing a mental picture to form in your readers' minds. It can take something so abstract like sadness and make it concrete: His heart was heavy like it was carrying the weight of the world. Unlike metaphors, readers are more explicitly aware of the direct comparison you use a simile to make.
In this article, we explore the meaning and examples of similes. We also offer helpful tips to guide you in writing remarkable and compelling similes.
What are Similes?
Similes are the most common form of comparison in language that is easy to identify. A simile is a figure of speech that directly compares two things. It highlights the similarities between two things by using comparison words such as "like," "as," "so," or "than." In the simile, “He growled like a mad dog.” And here, the insinuation isn’t that a person is actually growling like a mad dog. But this makes an emphatic comparison and a captivating description.
Six Classic Example of Similes
Similes are very common in fiction because it makes language more creative, entertaining, and descriptive. They give emotions a solid, tangible feature and make images vivid. They can emphasize qualities, evoke mental pictures, and arouse associated emotions. No wonder you can find them in every famous literature as far back as early Bible translations and even farther. And here are a few of its highlights in famous works of literature:
Matthew 23:27, King James Version (1611). “Woe unto you, scribes and Pharisees, hypocrites! For ye are like unto whited sepulchres, which indeed appear beautiful outward, but are within full of dead men's bones, and of all uncleanness.”
Charles Dickens, To Be Taken with a Grain of Salt (1865). “When I laid down the paper, I was aware of a flash — rush — flow — I do not know what to call it — no word I can find is satisfactorily descriptive — in which I seemed to see that bedroom passing through my room, like a picture impossibly painted on a running river.
Virginia Woolf, To the Lighthouse (1927). “Impressions poured in upon her of those two men, and to follow her thought was like following a voice which speaks too quickly to be taken down by one’s pencil.”
Joseph Conrad, Lord Jim (1899). “I would have given anything for the power to soothe her frail soul, tormenting itself in its invincible ignorance like a small bird beating about the cruel wires of a cage.”
Margaret Atwood. The Handmaid’s Tale (1985). “Time has not stood still. It has washed over me, washed me away, as if I’m nothing more than a woman of sand, left by a careless child too near the water.”
Margaret Mitchell, Gone with the Wind (1936). “The very mystery of him excited her curiosity like a door that had neither lock nor key.”
Tips for Writing Effective Similes
Here are a few tips for writing compelling similes:
Tip 1: Try to make your similes straightforward. A good simile is often concise and plain. It fits into the grand context of your writing and correlates with the mood you intend to set in a given passage.
Tip 2: Avoid cliches. Don't reuse similes, so your work doesn't seem void of creative language, the opposite of which is what similes intend to achieve. No "as easy as Sunday morning" or as "dumb as an arse."
Tip 3: Your similes should make your passage a fun read. Let them sound entertaining to your readers.
Tip 4: Let your similes create a vivid mental image that is remarkable and memorable. Let it be evocative and arrest the reader's imagination. They should bestow a person, place, or thing with form and meaning.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Frank Stephen