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Farewell, Motivation. Hello, Unfinished Book.
You've written half a novel, and now even a free afternoon won't persuade you to touch it. You still think about your characters while buying groceries, which makes your reluctance at the keyboard all the more irritating. You wanted to write this book, so where did the motivation go?
Consider what happened when you began: almost every hour delivered a discovery. You learned what your protagonist would do under pressure by putting that person in a room with somebody difficult. Forty thousand words later, you already know the answer to many of those questions. The surprises come less frequently, even though the writing now asks for more concentration. That's an ordinary change in the experience of creating something over several months.
But there's another possibility worth taking seriously, and it is inside the manuscript. Perhaps you know exactly how the novel ends, but the next few chapters seem to exist mainly to delay it. Your protagonist has spent twelve chapters reacting to events, while you keep inventing fresh events to keep things moving. An outline is a plan you made before you knew these characters as well as you do now. Ask what your protagonist is finally prepared to do that would have been unthinkable in chapter one. The answer may give your middle the decision it has been missing.
Suppose you're writing about a woman searching for her vanished father. You've planned another interview with a witness, but the scene feels lifeless before you've written a line. What if she already has enough information to find him and is frightened of what he'll say? Suddenly you have a different scene to write: she must decide whether she actually wants the answer. That decision can give the next chapter a direction your outline never anticipated.
Now, consider how your expectations have changed while you've been writing. At the beginning, you were writing to find out what happened, but now you're imagining the finished book being judged. That imagined audience can creep into your drafts until you're polishing each paragraph before permitting the next one to exist. That's a heck of a demand to make on a Tuesday afternoon. Try drafting a scene for your own eyes only, with the understanding that its language is temporary. Permit yourself to learn what happens first, then decide how beautifully it should be told.
Your energy gets a vote in this, too, especially after a demanding day. If you've been working all day, your concentration may have reached its limit long before you opened the manuscript. A night off can be useful, particularly when you leave one sentence waiting in your notes: what your character must decide next. That gives you a place to resume without spending the first hour reconstructing your intentions.
You can care fiercely about a book while feeling thoroughly sick of its current chapter. Your excitement cannot provide a reliable schedule, particularly after a year of drafting. When motivation disappears at the midpoint, ask whether the story has stopped giving your protagonist a meaningful choice. Sometimes the way back to your novel is to let your character make the decision you've been putting off.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Jamie Michele