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From Page to Heart: Why Colloquialisms Matter in Writing
Simply put, colloquialisms are words, phrases, or expressions that are used in everyday speech in a specific culture, religion, or community. Using them in stories, poetry, and even nonfiction books makes your writing authentic and alive, as well as relatable to readers from the specific culture or community where your story is set. There are both pros and cons when using colloquialisms. One of the main pros is that readers feel seen and understood when colloquialisms are correctly used in relation to a specific region. In relation to atmosphere, they add a layer of cultural texture and realism. These add authenticity to one's writing, especially as they make dialogue more distinct and believable. Another great benefit is that they can trigger nostalgia or recognition in readers, and creating strong emotions in readers is always a key element of a great story or poem.
As with most things, there are also downsides to using colloquialisms, but one can avoid the possible cons of using them. With regard to exclusivity, too many unfamiliar colloquialisms can alienate readers outside that culture. There is also the risk of confusing readers if terms aren’t explained or contextualized. Also, they can feel forced if every sentence is dripping with local slang. Here, balance is key - sprinkle, do not drown. To use colloquialisms effectively, apply them where they fit naturally, mainly in dialogue or cultural descriptions. I would advise providing a subtle context so non-local readers can follow as well. Balance the writing with universal language so the story remains accessible to all. Think of colloquialisms like spices: enough to flavor, not enough to overwhelm.
I recently read and reviewed a compilation of poetry by an American author who visited and wrote this anthology to include only poems about South Africa, where I am from. He used and listed South African colloquialisms from different South African languages, and he made a great impression on me. Being Afrikaans-speaking, I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the Afrikaans words that are used in South Africa universally. For example, the word “nice” is very rarely used in South Africa; mainly, we say that something is “lekker”, or that we are feeling “lekker”. The author made me feel included and valued, and I greatly appreciated his correct use of South Africanisms. Compared to books that are set in foreign countries but don't use colloquialisms in the same way (and therefore feel flat and generic and lacking local flavor), this anthology really stood out to me.
Using colloquialisms is a gift to both writers and their readers. They give writers a way to ground their work in the real world, adding layers of truth that can’t always be captured by formal language alone. For readers, they are little sparks of recognition, reminders of home, or even windows into a world they’ve never known before. When used with care, these everyday words and phrases bridge the gaps between cultures and people. They turn stories into conversations, and books into companions.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Paul Zietsman