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What separates great books from the rest? Below are articles with insights from real reviews and contest submissions—what works, what doesn’t, and how to improve your book. You’ll also find a wide range of articles covering writing, publishing, marketing, and more. Each article has a Comments section so you can read advice from other authors and leave your own.
Why Some Books Win Awards (And Most Don’t) — Insights From Real Contest Submissions New!
What separates award-winning books from the rest? After evaluating contest submissions across a wide range of genres, certain patterns become clear. Some books consistently rise to the top. Others, even with strong ideas and clear effort behind them, fall short. The difference is rarely dramatic—it...
What We’ve Learned From Reviewing Hundreds of Thousands of Books (And Why Most Don’t Stand Out) New!
After reviewing and evaluating books across thousands of submissions over the past two decades, certain patterns become impossible to ignore. Some books immediately stand out to reviewers. Others—even well-intentioned ones—fade into the middle or fall short. The difference is rarely luck. It comes down to...
Guidelines for Using Foreshadowing in Your Writing
Foreshadowing involves crafting earlier scenes to build expectation, tension, or understanding ahead of later plot developments. Mastering the art of foreshadowing is essential for creating a well-structured narrative. In this article, we discuss 7 guidelines on how to foreshadow effectively.
1. Foreshadowing should be paramount
It needs to be necessary. Not every future story event needs foreshadowing; save it for major plot events, else you risk your story reading like a melodramatic soap opera. A good example is a strange noise Hogwarts’ students hear from the wall in J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. That sound predicted the beast they later encountered.
2. Know the importance of foreshadowing
Foreshadowing portrays a character's action or an object that draws readers' attention and prepares them for a future plot event. Your foreshadowing needs to be pronounced for it to create suspense. Here, you can show your character hiding a knife in the inner pocket of his jacket; this portends a violent scene. It raises questions in the readers' minds, prospects that a future plot point can provide. Or, you may not intend to create active suspense; instead, you want to build a setup for a future plot situation. In this case, your foreshadowing should be subtle and inconspicuous.
3. Apply the 'Chekhov's Gun' principle
When the early parts of your novel include major actions, events, or revelations, these elements need a playoff later in your narrative. Otherwise, readers will feel dissatisfied or perplexed about the significance of events in your story. The principle of Chekhov's Gun applies to foreshadowing; if you mention a gun in your narrative, it should go off at some point.
4. Start from the story outline
Think about foreshadowing early in the plot outline stage; it's a narrative device you need to pre-plan if you want to execute it effectively. Foreshadowing needs to surface far enough in advance to forewarn the reader, but not so far ahead that the reader forgets about it. With a story outline, you can identify the right places to present scenes or incidents that make readers remember a significant earlier event.
5. Don't make it too obvious
In getting foreshadowing right, the key is to insert hints that the reader notices at a near-subconscious level. Readers need to look back and see what events clearly foretold the playoff, which combines stunners with inevitability. One creative technique for inserting forewarning subtly is by using interruptions. Here, the main character may happen on a very significant hint but gets interrupted by a phone call or something else. As the character shifts focus from the discovery, readers get distracted too until the playoff.
6. Meet the expectations you've stoked
The setup your foreshadowing creates needs to be matched with a climax that meets readers' expectations. When your buildup doesn't live up to these expectations that you have stirred, your readers will close your book feeling totally disappointed. And you may have just lost a fan. Except where you intend an anticlimax that thwarts readers' expectations, you should try to deliver on the promise the suspense in your story has stirred. Most especially ones that a specific genre requires.
7. Make foreshadowing part of the revision process
You can include foreshadowing as a way of adding or fixing plot links. Here, you may have already completed your first draft, and you notice events that require forewarning. You can be on the lookout for these events during your editing process, finding ways to link the early parts of your novel with the ending. Shocking events can be a brilliant idea for some narrative, but leaving hints and clues for readers to pick up or ignore will make your novel remarkable.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Frank Stephen