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How to Self-Edit Your Book: An Ultimate Checklist for Authors
Ah, the exhilarating moment when you type “The End” on your manuscript. But before you send it off to beta readers, agents, or publishers, there's one crucial step that could make or break your story—self-editing. Yes, I know. It sounds daunting. But trust me, mastering self-editing can be the difference between a polished gem and a messy draft. Over the years (and books), I’ve crafted a checklist that’s saved me time, tears, and many facepalms. Let me share it with you.
Why Self-Editing Matters More Than You Think
Before we dive into the checklist, let’s address the elephant in the room: Why bother editing yourself when a professional editor will eventually step in?
Simple. Your editor is not your cleanup crew. The cleaner your draft, the easier it is for them to concentrate on what is truly important—improving your story. Additionally, submitting a sloppy manuscript can hurt your chances of leaving a good impression on agents or publishers.
The Ultimate Self-Editing Checklist
1. Take a Break from Your Manuscript
Step away. Close the file. Hide it in a folder. Let it rest for a week (or two). This pause will help you return with fresh eyes and catch mistakes you’d otherwise miss.
2. Check Your Story’s Structure
Ask yourself:
Does every chapter have a clear purpose?
Are there any scenes that drag or feel repetitive?
Is the pacing consistent, or does it sag in the middle?
A quick trick: Create a one-sentence summary for each chapter. If you can’t summarize it, it might not be pulling its weight.
3. Focus on Your Characters
Characters are the heart of your story. Dive deep into their arcs.
Are their goals, motivations, and conflicts clear?
Do their decisions align with their personalities?
Is there consistency in how they speak and act?
Power Tip: If you find a character flat, ask, What’s their secret? Adding layers of depth can make them unforgettable.
4. Hunt for Plot Holes
Nothing frustrates readers more than unresolved threads or unbelievable twists. Look for:
Unanswered questions (unless you’re saving them for a sequel).
Convenient solutions that feel lazy (Oh, the protagonist just happened to have a hidden superpower?).
Contradictions in the timeline or world-building.
5. Strengthen Your Dialogue
Stiff or unnatural dialogue can ruin even the most brilliant story. Read conversations aloud. Does it flow? Does it sound like something a real person would say?
Avoid:
Info-dumping through dialogue.
Every character sounds the same.
6. Attack Filler Words and Passive Voice
Now it’s time to sharpen your sentences.
Search for words like very, just, really, and that. Slash them mercilessly.
Rewrite passive constructions (The book was read by me) into active ones (I read the book).
This step alone can make your writing 10x stronger.
7. Amp Up the Sensory Details
Can your reader smell the rain, taste the bitter coffee, or feel the icy wind?
Highlight areas where a description is sparse or generic.
Replace clichés with vivid, original imagery.
8. Proofread for Grammar and Spelling
Obvious? Sure. But easy to overlook. Tools like Grammarly can help, but don’t rely on them entirely. Read each sentence carefully. Pro tip: Read backward—start from the last sentence and work your way up.
9. Cut Mercilessly
Stephen King wasn’t joking when he said, “Kill your darlings.” If a scene, character, or subplot doesn’t serve your story, it has to go. Yes, it hurts. But your reader will thank you.
10. Read It Aloud (Again)
Before you consider your manuscript done, read it aloud one more time. This helps you:
Catch awkward phrasing.
Spot inconsistencies in tone or rhythm.
Experience your story as a reader would.
Bonus Tip: Don’t Self-Edit Alone
I know what you’re thinking—Isn’t this a self-editing guide? Yes, but receiving feedback from a reliable critique partner or beta reader is extremely valuable. They can identify aspects you might overlook, such as pacing problems or characters that aren't relatable. Self-editing isn’t about achieving perfection. It’s about refining your manuscript so it truly stands out. By utilizing this checklist, you’ll not only boost your confidence in your work but also enhance your story's chances of success. So, what’s holding you back? Grab your red pen (or your laptop) and get started. Your masterpiece is waiting!
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Chad Richins