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How To Write Colorful Metaphors
Writing metaphors is not a walk in the park. It's a hike across a treacherous part under the moonlight... The gist is metaphors are challenging but essential. Your prose and narration become riveting when you use this powerful tool. They enrich your language, enhance your meaning, and evoke moods and emotions. With the following instructions, you can color the canvas of your prose with these beautiful brushstrokes — I know, I'm dripping metaphors.
Collect the Attributes
First, you need to note the features of what you want to describe. What does it look, taste, and sound like? What do you feel when you see, touch, or hold it? Write down as many features that come to your mind, from the obvious to the less observed details. Allow your imagination to run free as you scribble down these features. You will not use most of them, but there is strength — and options — in number.
Find Associations
Next, write down other things that have the same qualities as the ones you've mentioned about what you want to describe. Here, an object can share the same traits as an animal. The creak of the floor can be the same as the cry of a distressed goat. The arm of justice can be the same as the fangs of a hungry tiger in seeking retribution. It may not all make sense, but just keep making free associations between the attributes of the thing you want to describe and other things. Try not to be conspicuous. Metaphors work well when it's unexpected, so let your imagination off the leash.
Identify the Right Tone
Metaphors carry with them a specific tone. So, before you choose what metaphor you will use for your writing, you need to consider the general mood you intend to create. Are you aiming for something spooky? Or are you writing a romance novel, and you want to evoke the feeling of lust, betrayal, intimacy, affection, or anger? Are you aiming for something lofty and divine or something mundane and disgusting? This would help you decide whether the house is "a brilliant star on the horizon" or "a thorn bush begging to be incinerated."
Write the Metaphorical Expression
The next step is to write down your metaphor in a sentence, a paragraph, or a page. Here, just allow the writing to flow with whatever metaphor you have chosen and see where the idea leads you. Let's say we decide, based on the mood, that the house is a thorn bush. We can write, "The house is a thorn bush begging to be incinerated just like everything else in her life; they are ugly and useless, and she just wants to set them all on fire. So, she headed to the basement to fetch the container of gasoline." Here, we see the chosen metaphor fits the mood of this scene and connects with the character's intention.
Tune it Right
Your metaphor needs to sound perfect, so you need to read it aloud to hear how it sounds. There needs to be a rhythm to it that sounds perfect. On this basis, our example earlier may not be a good fit, which is fine. You shouldn't conclude on a metaphor from the first written example. There is a need for experimentation until you find the perfect fit that sounds right. In this case, the house could be "a monstrous mountain of misery, looming with memories she wanted to set ablaze."
Expand Your Idea
Finally, you can extend the reach of your metaphor to create a more graphic description. Achieving this will require your metaphor to take more forms than just a noun. For example, "The predatory house growls at its resident until she cowers in depression, devouring her with its fangs of haunting memories and leaving behind a drunk carcass at the dead of night." Here, the metaphor is used as a noun, an adjective, and a verb. And this usage carries with it a surprising and powerful effect.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Frank Stephen