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Onomatopoeia
You have an amazing story. But then, when it gets to the point where you want to tell your reader about the distant barking of dogs in the neighborhood, the sound of the live engine of your truck in the garage, or the sound made by a heavy object that has fallen on the ground, things become a bit hard. There’s nothing as frustrating as not being able to describe and explain the sounds you hear daily through writing. The good thing is that this is not impossible. Have you heard of the word onomatopoeia? No? That explains why you are having trouble with describing sounds in your writing. Don’t worry because you are going to learn a lot about onomatopoeia.
The definition of Onomatopoeia
Onomatopoeia refers to a word that phonetically imitates, resembles, suggests, or evokes the sound they describe. You can still say onomatopoeia is a literary device - words whose pronunciations imitate the natural sounds made by things. Onomatopoeia is pronounced as “o-nuh-ma-tuh-pee-uh.”
There are some words that have been in use for ages, serving to describe the sounds of things that have existed since then. Such words have now been adopted as English words. An example of such a case is “bleat.” Even though the word describes the sound a sheep makes, it is more used as an English word than the sound of a sheep.
Examples of Onomatopoeia
The objects or things that produce (or make) sounds can be categorized into different groups depending on the type of object (that produces the sound). Examples of such groups include:
Animal sounds
The growl of a bear, badger, or dog
The roar of a lion or bear
The bray or hee-haw of a donkey
The bark, woof, ruff, arf, bow-bow, or howl of a dog
The screech of an eagle
The bugle of an elk
The cluck, crow, cha-caw, or bah-gawk of chicken (female)
The cock-a-doodle-doo of a cock
Mechanical sounds
Bang (for a gunshot or explosion)
Beep (for a car horn)
Creak (for a door that’s opening)
Crackle (for wood burning)
Ding dong (for a doorbell)
Vocal sounds/ human sounds
Hum
Burp
Groan
Giggle
Sniff
Whisper
Snore
Scream
Whistle
Sneeze (achoo or atishoo)
Cough
Impact sounds
Boom
Smack
Thump
Bang
Crash
Whack
Natural sounds
The pitter-patter of raindrops
The whoosh or howl of the wind
The gurgle of a river
The crunch of snow
The rustle of leaves
The uses of Onomatopoeia
To help the reader hear sounds
Onomatopoeia is used generally to enable the reader to hear sounds in writing. For example, consider the difference between the following sentences.
The night was quiet except for the occasional noise outside made by a dog.
The night was quiet except for the occasional woof of a dog.
The strong wind made a loud noise in the woods.
The whoosh of the wind in the woods was very loud.
In both cases, the second sentences enable the reader to hear the sounds made by the objects mentioned.
To arouse emotions in the reader
Onomatopoeia can be used to arouse emotions in a reader. Some of the sounds that can create an emotional effect on a reader include:
Screams (arouse tension, panic, or terror)
Ululations (arouse joy)
Sources
writingexplained.org/grammar-dictionary/onomatopoeia
https://www.litcharts.com/literary-devices-and-terms/onomatopoeia
https://literarydevices.net/onomatopoeia
https://www.supersummary.com/onomatopoeia
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Keith Mbuya