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Using Weather as a Character: How to Make Rain Feel Like Sadness!
Have you ever wondered how weather can influence a story, just like a character? Weather is not just a background; it can be used as a tool to reflect the mood, create tension, and symbolize emotions. Writers often use rain as an emotion that evokes sadness. But how can it bring uniqueness and be a vital element of your story? Let's explore how weather can play an important role in your story.
In literature, rain can signify desolation, gloom, or reflection. For example, in F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby, the scene where Gatsby reunites with Daisy takes place during a downpour. The rain implies Gatsby's nervousness and signifies the tension between the two characters. As the rain subsides, so too does the mood, indicating a change in their relationship. Here, the weather is not just a detail; it enhances the emotions.
Next, consider how weather affects feelings. Rain offers more than just a sight; it engages our senses of sound, smell, and touch. The rhythmic pattering of rain can convey loneliness or monotony. The scent of wet earth, called petrichor, for example, can stir up memories or announce fresh starts after turmoil. In Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights, the stormy weather reflects the inner turmoil and volatile relationships between the characters. Those wild, rain-soaked moors are a physical expansion of Heathcliff's turbulent, thriving emotions.
But rain doesn't always have to evoke sadness. It can murmur it, too. Subtlety often makes a scene more poignant. In Kazuo Ishiguro's The Remains of the Day, a rainy drive through the English countryside reflects the protagonist's inner life and unspoken regrets. The drizzle isn't sad, but it lingers, much like his emotions, creating a quiet, melancholic tone. So, if you're using rain as your theme, consider a stormy downpour or a gentle drizzle, whichever suits your narrative best.
A different approach is to render rain symbolic. In Toni Morrison's Song of Solomon, rain often signifies some big moment of change or realization. Whenever characters find themselves in the rain, the universe is either cleansing them of their pasts or opening them up for new experiences. Similarly, when you talk about rain, you can use it as a metaphor for cleansing, renewedness, or even inevitability—a reminder that some things are beyond human control.
Timing is everything. Rain at a funeral scene can feel overdone unless supported by thoughtful storytelling. Instead of portraying sadness, let it be a backdrop for the character's actions or dialogue. For example, say you have a character standing in the rain. Even though they have an umbrella, they pretend not to open it as if it were a sudden release from the pressure they have been carrying. Their silent acceptance of the rain could symbolize a longing for release or a quiet surrender to their emotions.
Rain offers opportunities for contrast, too. Picture a character experiencing joy on their first day at the office, only for a sudden downpour to leave them disappointed and spoil their day. Conversely, a grieving character might find the rain comforting, its relentless rhythm matching their tears and offering a strange sense of solidarity. You can add a twist to your story without getting into cliched territory. For example, acid rain in a dystopian environment might represent eco-collapse. Or an unseasonal rainstorm might crash a summer wedding, increasing tension and irony. Unique contexts can breathe new life into familiar weather tropes.
As a character, the weather needs a balance in the narrative. Rain shouldn't dominate the story but act as an additional factor. It needs a purpose and should weave seamlessly into the narrative. Whether to heighten emotion, represent change, or create contrast, rain can be more than just a backdrop. So, next time you're crafting a scene, here is your great chance to explore it with rain. Just think about how it sounds. How does it feel? What does it say about your character? When done well, rain can make your readers become soaked with empathy and do wonders for the narrative.
Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Manik Chaturmutha