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Writing An Engaging Sequence

The more you know about writing a novel, the easier it gets to dismantle the core areas of the manuscript down into bite-size moments. A novel breaks down into chapters, and those chapters into scenes. The scenes can then can be broken down into sections of action and dialogue.

Here are some steps to follow to create a captivating scene.

1. Every scene in a novel must contain a purpose to move the story forward.

Every sequence in a scene should be aiming to achieve an objective, whether it is to introduce a new character or to set up an obstacle that will be used later on in the story. So ask yourself this question before every sequence in your novel, ‘what is the purpose I want to achieve?' The sequence should also move the story forward in terms of plot development and character development, and a good writer will connect the previous scene with the next one. The trick is to resolve some of the issues, but always leave one or two for further scenes. It is a good idea to have your character appear in every scene. By involving your protagonist, you are ensuring the story is always progressing toward the ultimate objective. Your main goal should be working towards a final showdown where the character succeeds in his mission.

2. Walk and talk.

Never have two characters engaged in useless dialogue. Every word and every action must mean something. Even if they are talking while walking towards the next sequence. Use dialogue wisely. If it is not exposing something about the plot or the character's personality, something that you are going to use later in the story, then do not include it in your novel. If, for example, you want to include a sequence where the character has received bad news over the telephone, then you do not need to include them leaving work and driving home. You need to start the next sequence with the character entering the scene of the devastation. This way you are keeping the reader engaged.

3. Pace your action sequences.

It is perfectly acceptable to begin a scene in the middle of an action or catastrophe, however, you will want to save the most climactic scene until the last chapter. Keep the suspense going in the story by just throwing obstacle after obstacle in the character's path. The closer to the climax of the story, then the faster the pace of action needs to be. If you start too fast, the story will ultimately run out of steam.

4. Finish the scene dramatically.

At the end of each chapter, your main objective must be to leave the character with a decision to make. Remember, they must be constantly battling obstacles, so they need to be making constant decisions to resolve the problem and move toward their goal. Make the reader yearn for an insight into what is going to happen in the next chapter. This is how you add suspense and twists and turns into your story. Lead the reader one way, only to surprise them by taking them in the opposite direction. 

Written by Readers’ Favorite Reviewer Lesley Jones