58% Too Far


Fiction - Science Fiction
318 Pages
Reviewed on 06/14/2025
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Author Biography

M A Noordermeer grew up with a one-legged dad, a three-legged cat, and a fascination with what makes us human. She won writing awards at school—until teachers took issue with her choice of controversial topics.
After her first year of university, dabbling in philosophy, psychology, and sociology, she flew to Japan to work as an English teacher and fund her pilot training. She earned her commercial pilot’s license, became a flying instructor, then shifted into aviation strategy, completing a degree in Aviation Management and an MBA along the way. She co-founded the carbon offsetting company CarbonClick, and raised four kids in a blended family.
At last, she came back to writing. Her debut novel, 58% Too Far, draws on lifelong interests in extinct human species, ancient civilizations, and AI. She lives in Auckland, New Zealand, where she writes things her teachers probably still wouldn’t have approved of.

    Book Review

Reviewed by K.C. Finn for Readers' Favorite

M A Noordermeer's 58% Too Far is a dazzling sci-fi exploration of post-human evolution and the cost of unchecked progress. We’re with anthropologist Zadie Thornton, whose thesis on humanity’s future with AI is thrown into crisis until she awakens on Mushēški, a planet inhabited by AI-integrated descendants of ancient Sumerians. As she studies these emotion-dulled beings and their efforts to reclaim humanity, Zadie faces not only the ethical collapse of their experiments but the looming danger of a mental breakdown spreading through the species. With Earth on the verge of similar AI integration, Zadie must decide what kind of future is worth fighting for.

Author M A Noordermeer has written a book like none I’ve ever read before, and this cerebral, high-concept sci-fi tale is told with a human heart and philosophical edge, almost like a morality tale for the modern age. The first thing that jumps out at you is the commitment to detail and drama in the character development, and Zadie is a relatable but very complex and intelligent protagonist in an ethically murky universe. She explains her dilemmas well through speech and thought presentation so that the reader can understand easily, and there are a lot of interesting discoveries for her to make in the Anunnaki lore, which adds a unique mythological twist to classic sci-fi themes. There’s something very classic and mythic about the themes underneath the modern AI drama, and the clash of the two makes you think about contemporary issues with AI in new, unsettling ways. Overall, 58% Too Far is a highly recommended and impressive sci-fi work for fans of smart, urgent, and imaginative writing.

Keith Mbuya

It had been over half a decade of hard work and countless sacrifices for anthropologist Zadie Thornton as a doctoral candidate. Yet now, all that seemed to be for nothing. Her doctoral research on how humanity adapts to technology had been deemed obsolete before publishing. With her career at stake, she accepts her uncle’s mysterious offer to explore the future of AI. While she anticipates ending up at a top research facility, she finds herself on another planet, Musheski, the home of the Anunnaki. The Anunnaki, descendants of ancient Sumerians, managed to integrate their DNA with Quantum Sentience (QS) millennia ago. They achieved enhanced cognitive power and longevity from this, but at a terrible cost. They suffered from Quantum Psychosis, a condition that threatened their existence. However, they have a plan to solve this. It involves recreating and bringing back extinct human species. Discover more in M A Noordermeer’s 58% Too Far.

Lovers of science fiction novels with a blend of adventure, suspense, and speculative technology will find M A Noordermeer’s 58% Too Far an enthralling read. Noordermeer whisked me away from reality and dropped me into a world of imagination with a well-paced plot. The vivid depictions breathed life into the scenes. It felt like I was next to the cast, closely watching their moves. The subtle tone accompanying the storyline kept me guessing as to what would come next, keeping me flipping through the pages. The purposeful, character-driven conversations gave insight into the cast’s conflicts. The depictions of their emotions and the juxtaposition of their complex traits allowed me to connect with them. While humanity has proven throughout history to be adaptable to technological changes, perhaps it is not ready for AI. Noordermeer explores the themes of human technology integration, power, control, freedom, ethics, and more.

Essien Asian

Despite dedicating seven long years to her thesis, Zadie Thornton feels she has not made significant progress on her project. Tensions escalate when she receives a troubling notice about the potential rejection of her work unless she submits something substantial soon. Feeling defeated and short on ideas, Zadie turns to her uncle, who is involved in an archaeological site in Bahrain. He invites her to explore a peculiar artifact he unearthed during his dig. Nothing prepares Zadie for something that challenges all her beliefs about artificial intelligence and evolution. She soon realizes that her thrilling discovery comes at a steep cost in M.A. Noordermeer's 58% Too Far.

Drawing inspiration from ancient Mesopotamian lore, M.A. Noordermeer weaves an informative narrative that merges science fiction and history in 58% Too Far. Zadie's mention of her thesis struggles at various points suggests deeper personal issues that gradually surface as the story unfolds, highlighting realistic origin stories for the characters. The dialogue primarily revolves around scientific topics, with a central theme that explores the potential pitfalls of humanity's overreliance on artificial intelligence. Fans of science fiction will be captivated by Zadie's unusual experiments. Noordermeer blends factual references to the Anunnaki's origins and their potential impact on humanity's evolution with well-crafted fictional elements guaranteed to engage historical fiction enthusiasts. Her compelling narrative style, meticulous attention to detail, and steady pacing immerse readers in the adventure. Kudos to Noordermeer for seamlessly transforming an academic topic into an exhilarating science fiction adventure that both purists and casual readers will enjoy.