A Pretentious Mound of Flesh

A Lovecraftian Superhero Saga

Fiction - Adventure
419 Pages
Reviewed on 08/12/2025
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Reviewed by Paul Zietsman for Readers' Favorite

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh by Adrian P. is an unconventional superhero story that is as wild as it is satisfying. In the wake of their failure to stop a full Zin invasion, Earth’s four Dydalean Champions, Mitch, Bobby, Parka, and Farhan, are forced into an uneasy partnership with Quyto, a shape-shifting trickster from the enemy’s ranks. Their task is to disrupt seven ritual sites scattered across the globe, each guarded by a powerful Zin underboss loyal to The Don. The journey takes them from the streets of Rio to other cities steeped in peril, with every stop demanding not only strength but the courage to face personal ghosts. Among the most haunting foes is Myds’thall, the Obsidian Petrifier, whose attack comes in the form of reflected self-doubt - a weapon that cuts as deeply as any blade.

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh brims with style, bite, and heart. Adrian P. has a knack for pairing sharp, quick-fire humor with moments of real vulnerability, so the banter never undermines the weight of what’s at stake. Quyto’s relentless jabs, half-mocking and half-true, keep the tone unpredictable while pushing the characters toward growth. The action sequences are inventive without feeling overstuffed, and each location is rendered in vivid, lived-in detail, grounding the cosmic weirdness in tangible places. What stands out most is how the book blends spectacle with introspection, turning battles into moments of self-discovery, and moments of quiet into pivot points. It is more than just a capstone to a genre-bending series; it’s a layered, often funny, sometimes brutal exploration of identity, resilience, and what it means to keep fighting when you’re unsure if you’re the hero or just the last one standing.

Rabia Tanveer

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh is the third book in the Lovecraftian Superhero Saga by Adrian P. The novel follows four unlikely champions: Mitch, the blue champion and reluctant protagonist; Bobby, the brash orange champion; Parka, the fierce red champion; and Farhan, the calm yet determined green champion. They are tasked with saving Earth from the interdimensional Zins. These cosmic invaders, led by the enigmatic and menacing Don, have opened seven ritual nodes in cities worldwide, each guarded by an Underboss and filled with a manifestation of the Seven Deadly Sins. As the Champions battle through both physical and psychological trials, they need to travel around the world to stop this chaos before it is too late. Their guide is Quyto, a Zin trickster who has turned against his kind but is more interested in being insufferable than helpful. Can Mitch and the others save the world in time?

Author Adrian P created an incredible world where fantasy and reality intermingle and become one. The descriptions of Rio, Lagos, Al-Quds, Xi’an, Honolulu, Washington, D.C., and London were fantastic. The story is outstanding. Although I hadn’t read the previous novels in the series, I had no issues catching up with the story and connecting with the characters. Mitch is a fine protagonist. He is confident, smart, and very attentive. I loved how Mitch’s reluctant heroism, Bobby’s recklessness, Parka’s grit, and Farhan’s quiet strength are expressed through their journey. They all face challenges, and they must confront their demons one after the other. I loved Quyto and his snide, sarcastic nature. There was never a dull moment in the story, and the action was relentless. The narrative style was perfect, the dialogue was crisp, and the story was brilliant, to say the least. Highly recommended!

Jamie Michele

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh by Adrian P. follows Mitch, Parka, Bobby, and Farhan as they try to stop the Zin, a multidimensional force feeding on human behavior, from completing a global consumption ritual that would erase physical existence. Guided by the unreliable Quyto, they travel from Rio to Jerusalem, Xi’an, Hawaii, D.C., and London, confronting manifestations of the Zin’s influence, including psychological traps, altered dimensions, and corrupted social systems. Mitch undergoes repeated identity disintegration and simulations, resisting offers to abandon physical life in favor of abstract transcendence. The Zin’s leader, The Don, promotes a post-material order, but Mitch refuses. In London, Mitch deciphers Quyto’s riddles, survives symbolic trials, and strikes back at The Don, catalyzing a confrontation between celestial factions. As Paris collapses into a void, Mitch affirms physical existence and prepares for a final encounter with the Higher Being in Albion.

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh by Adrian P. is remarkably well-told, with a third-person perspective through Mitch serving as the ideal entry point, giving us direct access to his decisions while offering a rounded view of his team. The plot is driven by the need to stop the Zin, but what makes the book unique is its use of philosophy as the framework for action. This choice doesn’t distract; it sharpens. The settings are immersive, and I was especially pulled in by the sand vortex near the American Colony Hotel, a scene that destabilizes both space and logic. Character relationships evolve consistently, especially Mitch and Parka, whose playfulness gives their bond warmth and provides a breath of fresh air following punches of intensive drama. The pace is brisk, and the writing moves cleanly, with just enough unpredictability to keep readers' attention fixed. I liked this book for how smart it is, and readers who want substance in their fiction will too.

Asher Syed

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh by Adrian P. is book three in the Lovecraftian Superhero Saga, where previously, Earth was caught between the Zins and Dydals, rival interdimensional forces. The Dydals recruited four human Champions: Mitch, Bobby, Parka, and Farhan. Armed with advanced abilities and armor, they confronted Zin agents but failed to stop a dimensional Gate. The invasion begins under The Don, but Zin operative Quyto switches sides to join them. Now, Mitch and his team travel across Earth and alternate dimensions to sabotage the Zin and stop the attempt to rewrite human reality through illusions, simulations, and philosophical manipulation. Their goal is to disable ritual nodes powering the Zin’s influence, leading to a final confrontation where a sacrifice must be made to stop the force seeking to erase material existence.

Adrian P.'s A Pretentious Mound of Flesh is a cool journey through loads of locations in the battle to save actual, genuine reality. This is a new premise for me, and as a human reader who has not had my facilities impacted by the Zin, I can be trusted when I say this is an amazing book. The cultural exchanges in Samarkand and Xi’an made my heart skip a beat since parts of my family are from the Guanzhong plain, and the descriptions were true to life with respectful human interaction even in strange and shifting environments. The mixture of places linked to history and today, with historical futuristic elements, gives an edge to this novel and an unequaled vision of many backdrops that keeps the reader experiencing them with Mitch and the team. Great writing and excellent storytelling!

Carol Thompson

A Pretentious Mound of Flesh: A Lovecraftian Superhero Saga by Adrian P. is a bold and imaginative fusion of cosmic horror and superhero storytelling. The novel follows four Champions, Mitch, Bobby, Parka, and Farhan, tasked with defending humanity against interdimensional beings, the Zins and Dydals, whose battles transcend physical realms. The characters are deeply flawed, grappling with their own fears, desires, and moral dilemmas, which adds emotional depth to the cosmic stakes. Adrian P. blends Lovecraftian horror with human drama, vividly describing the Zin entities and their dimensions to evoke awe and dread. The philosophical undertones of the story challenge readers to reflect on humanity’s purpose, morality, and existence. Humor is skillfully woven into the narrative, often through the enigmatic Zin trickster Quyto, providing levity among the darker themes.

The pacing allows for immersive world-building and philosophical musings, balanced by vivid action sequences and poignant character interactions. A Pretentious Mound of Flesh defies traditional superhero tropes, offering a unique blend of cosmic horror, philosophical inquiry, and heartfelt human moments. The writing style significantly enhances the story's depth. Adrian P. employs vivid imagery to evoke awe and dread, immersing readers in the Lovecraftian horror elements and cosmic phenomena. ​Philosophical undertones explore existential questions about humanity, morality, and existence, adding intellectual depth to the narrative. ​Humor and levity, often through the enigmatic Zin trickster Quyto, provide relief amidst darker themes, maintaining engagement. ​Character-driven dialogue reveals the characters' inner conflicts and relationships, grounding the cosmic stakes in personal struggles. ​Dynamic pacing alternates between action-packed sequences, introspective moments, and philosophical musings, ensuring tension and reflection. This blend of vivid descriptions, intellectual inquiry, humor, and emotional dialogue creates a unique and memorable narrative that balances cosmic horror with superhero fiction. This captivating story will appeal to fans of cosmic horror and superhero narratives.