Incompetence


Fiction - General
217 Pages
Reviewed on 11/14/2026
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Reviewed by Dylan Insch for Readers' Favorite

Incompetence by Will Thorpe follows Wes Haas, a university literature professor driving east through the Pacific Northwest on a personal pilgrimage to Idaho. Haas is currently dealing with a major professional crisis after refusing to alter his graduate syllabus according to arbitrary institutional metrics, a situation made worse by an unexpected harassment investigation launched because he winked at a colleague. The road trip serves a dual purpose; he must also pick up his teen son, Linus, from his ex-wife’s home in Montana. As the miles stack up, Haas revisits the bizarre sequences that ended his marriage, while contemplating his bond with a ballerina named Aletheia and her unique pet cat. He’s running out of time to figure out how to be a proper father while his entire career is in jeopardy.

Incompetence by Will Thorpe is a satirical road trip novel that strips away the shiny veneer of modern careerism to reveal the complex realities of middle-aged parenthood. It covers themes like institutional absurdity, reconciliation, and the ghosts of memory. The pacing is well-balanced, never rushing Haas’ inner realizations. Haas is a fascinating guide on this trip; his memory lapses and biases make him feel like a real person. The mounting pressure from his university administration creates a strong sense of inevitable disaster that looms over every rest stop and campsite. The depiction of campus politics is brutally funny, contrasting with the open nature of the vast country setting of his trip. The writing is unique and engaging, opting for raw dialogue and dark humor to keep readers engaged. It is fascinating to watch the pieces of Haas’ past slide into place against the backdrop of the open highway. I think readers who appreciate an uncompromising, witty look at modern-day identity crises will be captivated by this tale from the very first mile.