Hilo Dome


Young Adult - Sci-Fi
200 Pages
Reviewed on 03/27/2025
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Reviewed by Asher Syed for Readers' Favorite

Hilo Dome by Jack Bartley follows Nathan, a mute telepathic teen in the post-war dome city of Hilo, who learns that the dome’s systems are failing. He evades capture but is swept away in the river and ends up outside the dome. Rescued by a “Feral” Honoliʻi villager, Kayli, he discovers the villagers are also telepathic. Nathan adjusts to life in Honoliʻi despite limited resources, in tandem with the same happening inside the dome. Meanwhile, Alfred Kawananakoa, a leader of a hostile Feral faction, plans to invade the dome to plunder resources. Honoliʻi may not be the immediate target, but he is at risk if he succeeds in Hilo, and Hilo's deteriorating defenses are inadequate to counter an attack. Nathan and the villagers must prepare themselves and warn the people in the dome, forcing Nathan to reconcile his past with the way he lives now and save those he loves on both sides of the dome.

Jack Bartley's Hilo Dome delivers a fantastic mix of what I can only think to call a dystopia in paradise, with two versions of post-apocalyptic society existing independently in the stunning landscape of Hawai'i. The premise is unique and Bartley wastes no time in immersing us both inside and outside the dome. Nathan is separated from his parents, but Bartley fills the void with Kayli, and the pair's dynamic grounds the plot. I like that we get multiple points of view, and, when it comes to survival, the line between who is right does blur. Yes, those inside the dome are resource hoarding, but what else would they do? Generations have passed, and both sides are neither responsible for nor have an understanding of what the others intend. The spycraft and the military preparations are first-rate. Overall, Bartley’s storytelling ensures that the suspense never wanes, leaving readers eager to see what will happen next. The story ends on a satisfying note, but there is promise for expansion, and I look forward to seeing if there is one. Recommended.

Deviant Quill Reviews

In a genre flooded with recycled dystopias and overcooked wastelands, Hilo Dome stands out like a plumeria blooming through ash. Set against the haunting beauty of a post-nuclear Hawaii, this tale offers not only fresh terrain but a meditation on identity, community, and the illusions of safety.

At the heart of the story is Nathan Ohana, a fourteen-year-old whose journey begins within the sterile safety of a domed city and spirals outward—both physically and emotionally—into a world far more alive, and far more dangerous, than he was raised to believe. What makes Hilo Dome stand out is not just its original setting, but the sincerity of its emotional core. The reader isn’t simply dragged through another battle for survival, but invited into a deeply personal story of rediscovery.

The relationship between Nathan and Kayli is particularly well-crafted, evolving with a natural, unforced rhythm that never dips into melodrama. Their bond—one that begins in shared bloodlines and blossoms into something quietly powerful—is the beating heart of the book. It anchors the plot, keeping it grounded even as the story crescendos into conflict and action.

Perhaps the most intriguing device is “thalk,” a form of telepathic communication that avoids the usual sci-fi clichés. It’s employed with restraint and elegance, acting more as a deepening of intimacy between characters than as a gimmick. The ability doesn’t overshadow the human moments but amplifies them.

Another thing that sets Hilo Dome apart is its unflinching respect for its cultural backdrop. Hawaiian traditions, language, and ways of life aren’t sprinkled in for aesthetic, but are woven into the fabric of the world with purpose and reverence. That authenticity is no accident. The author, who lived in O‘ahu for many years while serving as an officer in the U.S. Navy, brings a palpable understanding of the land and its people. It shows in the rhythm of the dialogue, in the landscape, in the way characters relate to both nature and one another. This grounding gives the speculative elements their weight and makes the world feel not just imagined, but remembered.

The pacing is thoughtful, measured in places, explosive in others, but never lags.

The first installment in a series, Hilo Dome offers not only a satisfying conclusion but a promise of more journeys, discoveries, and emotional growth to come. It shows a vision of the post-apocalypse that is lush rather than desolate, communal rather than isolating. It takes familiar tropes and reshapes them through a fresh lens, all while delivering a story that is human, grounded in culture, and brimming with heart. Readers looking for an adventure that respects both mind and spirit will find plenty to love here.

Highly recommended for fans of The Knife of Never Letting Go, The Tribe, and anyone tired of gray, gritty futures with nothing left to fight for.