Mate

A Novel in Twenty Games

Fiction - Literary
176 Pages
Reviewed on 12/08/2025
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Reviewed by Carol Thompson for Readers' Favorite

Mate: A Novel in Twenty Games by Robert Castle provides a unique perspective on marriage through the metaphor of chess. The author takes a creative approach, connecting the strategic moves of chess to the intricate dynamics of a marital relationship. The story is conveyed through twenty "games," each representing a different phase or facet of the marriage between Bill Pillsbury and Cynthia Larkin. The premise that marriage resembles a chess match where every move has weight and consequences is the foundation for exploring the complexities of human relationships. Castle's writing is sharp and perceptive, capturing the emotional highs and lows of a couple navigating love, conflict, and compromise.

By framing the story as a series of games, Robert Castle prompts readers to consider the strategic aspects of human relationships. Each game is meticulously described, with commentary that offers deeper insight into the characters' motivations and the outcomes of their actions. This structure boosts intellectual engagement and mirrors the deliberate nature of chess, where every move is purposeful and significant. The themes of love, power, and the inherent tragedy of marriage are openly examined. The portrayal of marriage as a battleground, where partners often feel driven to "annihilate" each other in their struggle for control, encourages readers to reflect on their own relationships and how they manage the delicate balance between love and conflict. Mate is a bold work that defies conventional storytelling. Its blend of literary fiction and strategic analysis highlights Castle’s masterful melding of the worlds of chess and marriage.

Gabriel Santos

Robert Castle’s Mate follows Cynthia Larkin and William Pillsbury’s lives as a married couple. This isn’t a regular novel written in prose, though. Instead, the story unfolds as a series of chess games where each “opponent” takes turns making moves. The games, twenty in total, cover various conflicts throughout the years, from discussions of what movies to watch to politics and raising children. A commentator analyses the match as they explain the reasoning (or lack thereof) behind each player’s moves and bring up context and alternative moves. May the best player win, whatever “winning” even means for them!

Mate’s unusual structure might trip you up in the beginning, but there’s a point to it. Robert Castle boils down the complex dynamics of marriage to a battle for dominance. Every word and action has a purpose or a double meaning, with no room for idle fun or sentimentality. The story feels odd and alienating by design, showing what happens when human connection takes a backseat to mind games. Speaking of games, they hop back and forth across time. Also, moves in one game often affect others. This setup seems chaotic at first, but it mirrors how conflicts blend together and slowly build grudges. For example, a passive-aggressive fight over food is about anything but food. It’s about years of unresolved resentment and feelings of inadequacy. The nonlinear storytelling also makes everything more engaging; I enjoyed learning more about the characters and connecting new information to previous games. By the way, you don’t need to know anything about chess, but if you do, you’ll appreciate the jokes and references.

Asher Syed

Mate by Robert Castle is a uniquely formatted story following Bill Pillsbury and Cynthia Larkin, with their life together written as a collection of chess games. This, quite literally, plays itself out with conversations every couple would normally have, but in moves that shift the direction of their lives. The plot traces their path from early courtship into married life, where choices about homes, workdays, child-rearing, relatives, and money slowly accumulate and redirect the pair. Each game focuses on one arena of daily life, showing how a single remark or routine task alters the next move and nudges their partnership in new directions. Across the years, the game spreads into new homes, new schedules, new connections, and new pressures. The plot shows how these steady turns, added one after another, guide the pair toward a changed arrangement over many years.

Mate: A Novel in Twenty Games by Robert Castle offers a sharply observed look at a long marriage shaped by everyday choices that gain remarkable force as each partner makes a move that shifts their shared course. Castle brings energy to the conversations about errands, parenting, travel plans, houses, and even lunch, and he turns ordinary moments into scenes that reveal how two people try to understand each other while rarely admitting how much their choices matter. The form adds spark as wins, draws, and resignations highlight patterns that feel instantly recognizable. Bill’s optimism and Cynthia’s resolve come through in brief quips and sudden turns that carry real bite. The book’s strongest quality is its steady confidence that ordinary life has plenty of drama, and this gives the novel lasting appeal for many readers today.