Tear of God

Elements

Fiction - Science Fiction
288 Pages
Reviewed on 04/24/2015
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Author Biography

Raymond has enjoyed writing from an early age. After exploring a variety of other formats, he just recently started writing novels. His character driven stories reflect the diversity of the places he has lived and the jobs he has had, focusing on animals and film. He lives in Coastal North Carolina with his wife and two daughters.

    Book Review

Reviewed by Bil Howard for Readers' Favorite

You'll have an affinity for the Elements Series of Raymond Henri after reading Tear of God. This action packed sci-fi adventure starts off with a camping trip in which Mink's parents, Jure and Nyam, are trying to help their 16-year-old son find his element affinity. Finding one's affinity typically takes place around the age of five, and because Mink has never discovered his, he is the butt of jokes and the kid that is picked on. Meaning well, his parents put him through a series of tests that are meant to discover his affinity. In the process, they discover that there is a Tear of God in a cavern nearby. The Tear of God is a giant geode that is said to have come from the eye of God and holds significant power if it can be retrieved and placed in Octernal. Due to circumstances, Mink is forced to take a trip, making use of one of his mother's elemental powers in order to return to the capital and report to the counsel concerning the Tear of God. From that point forward, the mundane and meaningless life of the only boy who doesn't have an element begins to change. Taking on a huge amount of responsibility, Mink leads a group of Elementalists back to the cavern where the Tear of God is located, but things don't turn out to be so simple for the team. In the process, however, Mink begins to come of age and discover that there is more to him than being the boy without an element.

I was pleasantly surprised by Tear of God; in fact, I was thrilled to have a chance to read this installment in Raymond Henri's Elements Series. Though I'm not a huge fan of sci-fi fantasy, the author drew me in instantly and held me in his grip with a compelling story and well developed characters. I felt every minute of Mink's struggle and was cheering for him all the way to the end. Sci-fi enthusiasts ought to be truly pleased with Tear of God and those who are already familiar with the series will be ecstatic. Excellent read! I'm very impressed. I can't wait for the next book in the series.

Lit Amri

In Tear of God: Elements by Raymond Henri, sixteen-year-old Mink has yet to gain his Elemental affinity, something that is typically mastered by a five-year-old. It is an utter embarrassment to Mink, since it also leads to him being bullied by the others. For years, his parents - Juré and Nyam - try to figure out whether his Element is Lightning, Air, Spirit, Water, Wood, Soil, Body or Fire. Any Element would do, as long as he has one.

When Mink and his parents discover a Machinist scout who found the Tear of God, a powerful large crystal, they send Mink back to the city for aid. Octernal High Council doubts the news, but sends an army disguised as a Youth Camp to accompany him back to his parents’ camp and retrieve the crystal. It’s Mink's opportunity to prove his worth, especially to Gyov, for whom he has feelings. But the mission is highly dangerous, and Machinists are not the only enemies they have to worry about. There are also the death-worshiping Reeks, who turn the corpses of their kills into puppets.

Tear of God: Elements by Raymond Henri is highly engaging from the beginning. The characters are well-developed and authentic. It’s easy to sympathize with Mink, but he still manages to have a positive attitude about his situation, and his wittiness makes him likable. The story pace is considerably fast. Initially, I thought Henri left too little breathing space for readers to familiarize themselves with his world-building, particularly its concept of Elementalists and Machinists, and how each Element affinity works and so on. Yet, the concept isn't difficult to understand due to the straightforward terms that are used. For example, as an Elementalist, Quick Legs effect is to make someone move faster, and Hard Body is to make one’s body literally solid as a rock. Overall, Tear of God is an enjoyable read. There’s an edge of consequence and a real sense of stakes, making it perceptive and sharp.

Janelle Alex, Ph.D.

Raymond Henri has crafted an interesting tale in Tear of God - Elements. In this science fiction thriller, a mother and father desperately attempt to discover their son Mink's special element by any means possible. Upon taking a trip, disguised originally as a vacation, they plan to explore new possibilities. You soon learn just how far this family is willing to go to uncover what most youths know about themselves far sooner. It may even seem shocking. Then Henri adds a unique twist to the tale. It is obvious from early on that the main characters are not like we are as humans. In fact, once the first plot twist arises, you come to learn that humans are most likely the Machinists and are considered evil. It seems the Machinists have found the Tear of God. Mink thought the Tear of God was just a myth, but what if it does exist? What lengths will Mink and his family be forced to go to in an effort to conserve the deeply protected secret of the Tear of God? Perhaps even taking the life of another? This darker option is disturbing to Mink, but without knowing which element he is connected to, will he be able to help his parents and his kind? Will he be interrogated by leaders about the help he does offer? Ultimately, will it be enough to save the Tear of God and his parents?

I found Raymond Henri's Tear of God to be interesting, though somewhat confusing to follow at times. With a large number of characters and the nifty, but very odd names, it was simply challenging to keep track of the storyline now and again. I also felt there was so much emphasis placed on discovering Mink's element, only to drastically shift gears towards a different focus. But as I moved through the story, I found I had it eventually all worked together. It is quite a long tale, but one that should hold your interest.