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AN AWARD-WINNING AUTHOR BORN IN RIO DE JANEIRO, BRAZIL, EDMOND LIVED OVER two decades in Ontario, Upland, and Rancho Cucamonga, California. He completed studies in Information Systems and Philosophy at Chaffey College before channeling his creativity into founding an advertising agency, where he specialized in graphic design and copy editing. Long had he worked in creative fields before he found his true calling in writing, through which he weaves his love of history into stories that give voice to the silenced and erased.
After a lifetime of reading novels by Victor Hugo, Alexandre Dumas, Gustave Flaubert, Émile Zola, Oscar Wilde, Jane Austen, Sidney Sheldon, and Anne Rice, he set out to write the stories he had always searched for but never found: tales of gay protagonists who defy the norms of their age. He is also the author of the "Gay Classicist Manifesto," a call to fellow writers to help restore LGBTQ+ representation in the literary canon.
Now writing full-time, he enjoys a quiet life farther up the coast from his birthplace, drawing inspiration from the haunting visions and whispers of the past. You may engage with him on TikTok and X by searching for @ethornauthor. He welcomes reader feedback and kindly asks you to leave a review. Honest opinions help readers find the right books.
Reviewed by Saifunnissa Hassam for Readers' Favorite
Edmond Thornfield’s novel, Asterios and the Labyrinth (Mythos of Knossos), is a reimagined, action-packed mythological and historical story, set in ancient Krete (Crete) during the period of the Bronze Age Minoan civilization. When King Minos dies, his son Asterios succeeds him as the ruler of the Kingdom of Labrys. Prince Phaistos of Archanes is commander-in-chief of King Asterios’ army. Asterios and Phaistos are also lovers, a relationship sanctified by the goddess Ishtar. However, both Asterios and Phaistos must protect their bloodlines and kingdoms through legitimate heirs. Two rebel lords, Koronos and Lykosander, are strongly opposed to King Asterios’ rule and threaten war. When Phaistos rides to Archanes to join Asterios’ army, he is captured by the rebel lords. Asterios calls on his allies to help defend Knossos, while he leads his men to fight Koronos and Lykosander, and to free Phaistos. The story grows more complex, driven by power struggles, and Asterios’ fierce determination to rescue the love of his life, Phaistos.
I found myself immersed right from the start with the complex characters and their compelling, thought-provoking, multilayered story of love, duty, identity, and sexuality. I loved the archaic-style prose, turning this ancient Greek tale into an intense political, social, and moral drama. The dialogues, thoughts, emotions, as well as the descriptions of sieges, skirmishes, and battles, brought ancient Greece and the Minoan civilization vividly to life. I particularly liked the development of Asterios and Phaistos as the story progressed. The political and military conflicts were handled realistically, evocative of ancient Greek times; a compelling and immersive backdrop to Asterios’ character development, from prince to a powerful and courageous king. I liked how Phaistos's incredible courage, fierce love, and loyalty to Asterios are expressed in actions, emotions, and thoughts when he is captured by the rebel lords. The story was thrilling when love, loyalty, and hope were tested to the extreme in desperate situations when escape was virtually impossible. I highly recommend Edmond Thornfield’s Asterios and the Labyrinth to readers who enjoy mythological and historical fiction, with complex characters, stories of identity, power struggles, and sexuality, and compelling moral and social issues.
Set on the island of Crete during the Minoan Bronze Age some 3,500 years ago, Asterios and the Labyrinth: Mythos of Knossos by Edmond Thornfield is a tale of gods, kings, heroes, revolts, and magical powers. The Minoans, a wealthy people known for their farming and commerce, experienced some turbulence following the death of King Minos of Knossos. His son, Prince Asterios, took over, but his romantic involvement with Prince Phaistos didn't sit well with everyone, sparking a power struggle. He and Phaistos were faced with marriages of convenience to unite kingdoms, restore decorum, and secure the continuity of the royal bloodline. During a rebellion, Phaistos was captured by the enemy and subjected to humiliation. As King Asterios set sail for Kydonia to rescue him, a tale of ancient rituals, torture, and bloody battles unfolds. His mother, sister, and aunt resorted to sorcery to shield Asterios in his efforts to protect his throne. That battle won, royal weddings were followed by a new plot to overthrow the king, and his army sailed to Zakro for a showdown.
Edmond Thornfield combines mythology with archaeology in an impressive reconstruction of ancient times. It is filled with historical details and an evocative depiction of the lifestyle of the Mediterranean in that era. Asterios and the Labyrinth is a tale of ambition, envy, malice, love, treachery, and alliances against a common enemy. It describes kingly duty, political wrangling, and the exchange of hostages. The writing style reflects the ethos of the age, adding to the epic nature of the storyline and fitting its classical setting perfectly. The book is recommended for mature readers, as violence and sex feature prominently, which reflects royal privilege and the prevailing social norms, with an underlying LGBTQ+ tone. There is also no shortage of death and destruction. It will appeal to a readership that enjoys mythological fiction and is comfortable with what the author describes as complex moral and social themes.
Asterios and the Labyrinth (Mythos of Knossos) by Edmond Thornfield transports readers back to the time of ancient Greek power, of mythical beasts, sorcerers, and the battle for royal succession. Upon the death of King Minos, his son Asterios must succeed to the throne before the various warlords tear the kingdom apart in their quest for power. Despite Asterios’ commitment to his lover and fellow prince, Phaistos, he must marry a woman to bear him children and heirs to ensure the continuity of The House of the Divine Bull and Europa. With the powerful lords Koronos and Lykosander already seeking to usurp the young king, Asterios must rely on the help of his sister, mother, and aunt, all powerful sorceresses, to give him an edge over his enemies in battle. He must rely on his family’s most fearsome of allies, Echidna, the Mother of all Monsters, to help defeat Koronos and Lykosander, as he and Phaistos lay siege to the cities of Kydonia and Zakro.
Asterios and the Labyrinth is an epic, sweeping tale of Minoan culture, life, and warfare that reads like the greatest of Greek epics. Edmond Thornfield has perfectly captured the beauty, mysticism, and daily life of Minoan culture during the Bronze Age. There is no shortage of battle action, excitement, and bloody conflict; this is beautifully contrasted with the loving, soulful relationship between Asterios and Phaistos. I was equally impressed by the pair’s willingness to forgo their complete commitment to each other to take wives and procreate, thereby furthering their royal lines. That they both felt something deep and meaningful toward their women speaks highly of their characters and commitment to their roles. It was abundantly clear, however, that their love for each other was above all, and I commend the author for the loving depiction of their relationship. The sorcery and mythical monsters just added wonderfully to what was already a great heroic tale. The author’s writing style is in keeping with the ideal of an ancient tale being reenacted. Asterios's ability to navigate the many moral and cultural issues, including an element of homophobia, is part of what makes this novel so nuanced, complex, and enjoyable. I thoroughly appreciated and highly recommend it.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ FEB 2026 Literary Titan Book Award Winner
"Asterios and the Labyrinth" follows Prince Asterios of Knossos as his father dies, political rivals rise against him, foreign powers threaten the island, and love pulls him in directions that the laws of his world barely allow. The story blends palace intrigue, war, prophecy, and a passionate bond between Asterios and the warrior Phaistos. The book moves from grief to revolt to full-scale devastation as Asterios tries to hold his kingdom together while fighting for the man he loves and the legacy he is sworn to protect.
The writing is lush and almost feverish in places, and that style suits the mythic setting. I liked how author Edmond Thornfield lets emotions lead the scenes instead of rushing through them. Asterios's grief for his father, his fear of losing Phaistos, and the heavy burden of the crown get real space to breathe. I felt the weight he carries and the fire that keeps pushing him forward. The political maneuvering is sharp, too. You can almost feel the treachery when figures like Koronos appear, and those moments gave the story a dangerous edge that kept me hooked.
Thornfield uses myth as a stage to talk about loyalty, love, and identity in a way that feels timeless. The romance between Asterios and Phaistos is tender and fiery and written with such sincerity that I kept rooting for them even when the world around them fell apart. I also liked that the story never hides the cruelty of power. Rulers here bleed, mourn, and make choices that hurt. The rituals, the prophecies, and the glimpses of divine influence gave the book a strange beauty, and I often found myself pausing just to picture a scene more clearly. The battles feel brutal. The magic feels ancient. The love feels stubborn in the best way.
I walked away thinking this book is for readers who enjoy myth retellings that lean into emotion and drama. It is for anyone who wants an epic that is not afraid of intimacy, or a romance that stands tall inside a world full of knives. "Asterios and the Labyrinth" feels to me like "The Song of Achilles" collided with a palace-politics thriller, blending tender queer love with sweeping mythic stakes in a way that scratches the same emotional itch while carving out its own bold identity. If you like political intrigue, queer love stories woven into legendary pasts, or richly detailed worlds that feel almost operatic, this book will hit the spot.
This novel is amazing
From the very first pages, I felt transported to the Minoan world. The author doesn’t lecture or infodump. Instead, he conveys the setting through sights, sounds, and sensations experienced by the characters themselves. The palaces, the rituals, the sea winds off Crete—all of it shows authenticity. But what sets this novel apart is not just the world-building, it’s the people who inhabit it. Asterios, his family, Phaistos, and even the villains are not stock figures from myth. They are flesh-and-blood souls, with fears, hopes, loyalties, and flaws that make them lifelike. Their choices matter and their courage inspires. More than once, I found myself pausing to feel the weight of what they endured.
The prose is lyrical. Every sentence seems measured with care, yet it flows so naturally that I often forgot I was reading. I was simply living alongside the characters. This is not a story you consume and set aside. I am still haunted by it.
This is the second novel I read by this author, plus the short story that he wrote. I'm a fan now. When do the sequels come out?
Queer Myth Love Story
I don’t usually cry over battle scenes, but this book got me. The world is brutal and beautiful, the magic subtle but powerful, and the romance between Asterios and Phaistos is so raw and real I had to stop and breathe. If you’ve ever wanted to read a queer myth that feels like an ancient legend but still speaks to your heart today—this is the one.
Edmond Thornfield and the archaic resonance of Bronze Age Cretan identity
Edmond Thornfield delivers a masterfully reconstructed retelling of the Minos legacy, blending archaeological precision with a sweeping, literary exploration of power and forbidden love. I found the technical handling of the Bronze Age setting excellent, particularly in how it revitalizes the House of the Divine Bull through a rigorous historical lens rather than mere fantasy. The narrative excels in its use of elevated, archaic prose to navigate the political urgency of the sieges of Kydonia and Zakro, while maintaining a deeply intimate focus on Asterios’s struggle to reconcile his duty to the crown with his devotion to Prince Phaistos. I was particularly struck by the honesty in portraying the brutal societal constraints of 1450 BCE, where the "labyrinth" becomes a metaphor for the complex moral and social traps surrounding gender, orientation, and dynastic survival. It is a dense and evocative work, ideal for readers who cherish the historical depth of Mary Renault and seek a mythic retelling that treats human dignity and ancient tragedy with equal weight.
Minos After Theseus
Edmond Thornfield's “Asterios and the Labyrinth” begins where most Minotaur retellings end: Theseus departed, King Minos dead. Prince Asterios must claim his throne while navigating rebel lords who question his fitness to rule because he "lies with another man", Phaistos, his lover of three years.
The novel's strength lies in its unapologetic centering of queer desire in Bronze Age Crete. The relationship between Asterios and Phaistos is neither subtext nor tragedy. They are explicitly devoted, their bond both politically fraught and emotionally central to the narrative. Thornfield's pseudo-Homeric prose ("O'er his beloved's hands he places his own") lends weight to intimate moments, though it is occasionally overdone and smothers pacing. A late chapter where Phaistos protests that he "entered into manhood sans a woman" reads as both historically grounded and defiantly modern, refusing the heteronormative scripts that often straitjacket historical fiction.
The plotting sprawls across forty chapters of succession rites, sieges, and rebels being turned into swine. When witches dance atop the palace as nobles become livestock, it becomes gloriously camp. When Asterios frets over grain inventories for pages, the tonal whiplash between mythic fantasy and grounded politics strains. Whole subplots, like Asterios's forced marriages to Egyptian and Israelite princesses, feel pro forma and could have been cut without injury.
“Asterios and the Labyrinth” delivers something genuinely rare: a gay man claiming his throne, defending his kingdom, and keeping his lover at his side. At a quarter shorter, with tighter focus, the novel would soar. As is, it's an admirable, if overlong, feast for high-quality historical romance.
Classical adventure
An absolutely stunning story of fate, redemption, and sweeping adventures set in ancient Greece. In a time of petty gods and ancient oracles, the Fates decided the destinies of mortals and demi-gods. Asterios has to rescue his beloved after the death of his father. The mother of monsters has released her most terrifying child into the labyrinth and Asterios must lead his men into battle to save Knossos.
Immersive, rich, and emotionally powerful
From the first chapters, I felt completely drawn into the world of Bronze Age Crete. The setting feels vivid and alive, not because of long explanations, but through the way the characters experience it. What stood out most to me is how human everyone feels. Asterios and those around him aren’t distant mythological figures, they have doubts, loyalties, fears, and real emotional weight. Their choices carry consequences, and that gives the story depth beyond the historical backdrop. The writing flows beautifully without feeling heavy. It’s the kind of novel that stays with you after you close it. If you enjoy myth-inspired historical fiction with strong characters and atmosphere, this is absolutely worth reading.
A surprisingly elegant and ambitious novel.
"Asterios and the Labyrinth:" 1 is a substantial novel, and the result it achieves is just as substantial. It is an intense and refined historical fantasy that transforms myth into a deeply human story about power, grief, love, and destiny. Edmond Thornfield doesn’t simply tell an epic adventure. He builds a believable world filled with rituals, politics, and dynastic tensions. Knossos is not a mere backdrop but a living, breathing organism. You can feel the weight of the crown, the fragile alliances between the lords, and the constant threat of betrayal. At the heart of the novel, however, is Asterios himself: not an invincible hero, but a man who suffers, doubts, and loves fiercely. His relationship with Phaistos is handled with a level of care and sensitivity that is rare in fantasy, and it becomes the true emotional engine of the story.
There are lines that truly stay with you, such as: “a tear opens as boundless as the deep sea’s void” or when Asterios promises, “You alone shall be my true consort.”
The prose is lyrical, solemn, almost poetic. This is not a quick or easy read, but that very density is what makes "Asterios and the Labyrinth" so immersive and mature.
A clear winner. Highly recommended for readers who love mythological fantasy like "Circe" or "The Song of Achilles", but with more politics, more tragedy, and above all, more heart.
a fresh spin on old tales
i picked up this book cause ancient myths always pull me in. from the start, asterios’s path to becoming king grabs you with its mix of danger from outside enemies and creepy magic spells lurking around. his deep connection with phaistos brings real emotion, making their moments together stand out amid the chaos. then theres the strong women like pasiphae and echidna who add smarts and power to the story, shaking things up in cool ways. the action scenes are intense, with battles and twists that keep you hooked, but it also make you ponder big ideas like duty and what fate really means. the world feels alive, like you’re right there in bronze age knossos with the palaces and rituals. ending is a teaser that left me eager for whats next. perfect for anyone who loves fresh spins on classic legends, i couldnt put it down.
a lush, atmospheric dive into a reimagined Bronze Age
"Asterios and the Labyrinth" by Edmond Thornfield is a lush, atmospheric dive into a reimagined Bronze Age Crete that feels both historical and high-fantasy. From the opening chapters, Thornfield does an excellent job of establishing the high stakes; with the death of King Minos, the weight of the crown feels visceral. I particularly enjoyed how Asterios isn’t portrayed as a typical powerhouse hero, but rather a man thrust into a "willing or nilling" situation to save his bloodline and his people from the chaos of rebel lords.
The world-building is where this book truly shines. The inclusion of the "House of the Divine Bull" and the sorcery of the female figures—his mother and the formidable Mother of All Monsters—adds a layer of dread and mysticism that kept me turning the pages. The military campaigns against Kydonia and Zakro are well-paced, providing a gritty contrast to the emotional core of the story: Asterios’s relationship with Prince Phaistos.
An enchanting novel with a blend of philosophy, psychology and rich narrative!
"Asterios and the Labyrinth" is an introspective prose filled with poetic and lyrical elegance. The story follows Asterios in his journey through the literal and symbolic labyrinths that are tied to his memory, struggles and identity. He has a complex character with a flawed, self-aware, yet deeply human and relatable nature. The story unfolds in a way different than most authors usually follow – experimenting with the structure by using fragmented chapters, dream sequences and philosophical deviations that make this book very immersive to read. This book beautifully oscillates between slow reflection and brief bursts of action. Although this story is not plot-heavy, it can still captivate its readers through the emotional and philosophical journeys crafted with deep contemplative rhythm. However, the readers may feel challenged due to the intentionally ambiguous climax - especially those readers who prefer a straightforward narrative may feel slightly dejected. Overall, this is a great novel that enjoys philosophical depth and rich immersive literature.
Well written
I found "Asterios and the Labyrinth" to be a vivid, ambitious retelling. It had swords, sorcery, political tension, and a love that tries to survive chaos. The concept drew me in immediately. After the death of his father the king, Asterios (the MC) had to ascend the throne of a fractured kingdom whilst facing various threats. I was impressed with the writing style. It was immersive, yet written in a way fitting of that culture but still enough that i could understand.
A prince, a labyrinth, and a love that shook Crete
You're stepping right into a massive mythical battle with this book. But the toughest battle for Asterios isn't fought on the war field. It’s a fight in his own heart. He is completely devoted to Prince Phaistos, who leads his army and keeps his soul safe. Their bond is beautiful and strong, but the political reality of the contested crown is terrifying. The novel is packed with intense action, including military sieges and dark sorcery. It’s a true epic about love, duty, and defying fate itself, all wrapped up in a world of ancient gods and powerful women.
This novel defies easy classification
As someone who studied Greek mythology and grew up devouring Bernard Cornwell and Mary Renault, this novel scratched an itch I didn’t know I still had. It’s mythic, brutal, tender, and queer in the most unapologetic, triumphant way. It was hard to put down and go about my life. I've been to Crete. This novel took me back there—3000 years ago! Loved it.
This novel defies easy classification
"I expected an epic tale of heroes, swords, and adventure. What I didn’t expect was to be brought to silence by the sheer humanity of its characters. Asterios and Phaistos are warriors, yes, but more than that, they’re men learning how to love in a world that gives them no permission. I'm not gay—but this story moved me. It was like hearing the voice of an ancient storyteller in my mind. The writing is stunning!"
A good read
I went in expecting a straightforward fantasy and came out with something far richer — a smart, unsettling story about truth, power, and the stories societies build to protect themselves, carried by a protagonist whose confidence slowly fractures.
Almost every fantasy has a theme and the book works on two levels, as both a deadly setting and a metaphor that strips away comforting illusions piece by piece. It’s less about magic and monsters and more about truth, power, and how societies survive on carefully constructed lies.
What impressed me most is how the characters feel real in their uncertainty and moral compromises, not like stock heroes and villains. I felt I could relate to the ups and downs to of the characters.
The book turns a familiar premise into something quietly political and deeply thought-provoking without relying on spectacle.
A Crown of Desire and Duty in a Bronze Age Labyrinth
There’s a solemn, almost ceremonial weight to Asterios and the Labyrinth by Edmond Thornfield—a story that feels carved from stone and lit by firelight. It carries both the grandeur of myth and the ache of something deeply personal.
Asterios is not a conquering hero so much as a man pressed between longing and obligation—painfully devoted, quietly defiant, and burdened by inheritance. His love for Phaistos isn’t a subplot; it’s the axis on which his choices turn, sharpening every political move into something intimate and costly. That tension—between crown and heart—gives the narrative its emotional gravity .
The prose is richly atmospheric, often deliberate in its cadence, echoing classical influences without becoming unreadable. At times, the density slows the pace into a true slow burn, but it rewards patience with immersive detail and thematic depth.
I would recommend this book if you prefer character-driven emotional stakes over rapid-fire action, and lyrical, classical prose over modern minimalism.
