The Echoes Beneath


Fiction - Dystopia
413 Pages
Reviewed on 12/14/2024
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Author Biography

J. M. (Jimmy) Ammoun is a Canadian science fiction author hailing from Southwestern Ontario. His debut novel, 'The Echoes Beneath', was released to general acclaim in February of 2024, courtesy of the Metropolitan Syndicate Press.

    Book Review

Reviewed by Romuald Dzemo for Readers' Favorite

The Echoes Beneath by J. M. Ammoun is a compelling exploration of interconnected lives against Midian's complex societal structure. The novel, characterized by its intricate plot and well-drawn characters, examines the echoes of individual actions in a city caught between the powerful Syndicate and the grassroots Citizenry. In this dystopian cityscape where the privileged walk above on the Mantle and the masses struggle below, readers are introduced to the intertwined fates of four individuals caught in the throes of ambition and redemption. Atlas Ramsay, haunted by his past, seeks salvation in the Undercity, only to have his plans jeopardized by a rekindled relationship. Samantha Salem is thrust into leadership after her mentor's murder and must wade through dangerous political waters to maintain peace. Arvin, a child of faith turned vengeful survivor, finds himself at the heart of a deadly city conspiracy. Midian’s Grand Magus, Solomon Sands, yearns for reverence amidst fading faith, inadvertently playing into sinister plots. As their destinies converge, Midian’s hidden agendas and dark secrets threaten to reshape life beneath the Mantle forever.

The book opens with the forced retirement of Chairman Lutz, a Machiavellian figure whose removal sets off a chain of events impacting various factions within Midian. The narrative shifts between different characters, with points of view that are ingeniously delivered. There are escalations with murder, conflict in leadership, and conflicting interests but J. M. Ammoun skillfully handles these different elements of the story. Key plot points include Sami's struggle to unify resistance against the burgeoning power of the Citizenry's new authoritarian leader, Bass, who is revealed to have sinister ambitions. Meanwhile, the Syndicate is portrayed as an overarching force, augmenting the conflict in Sami's quest for justice and autonomy. The Echoes Beneath is marked by vivid descriptions and a narrative that seamlessly weaves personal and political drama. The author uses a multi-perspective approach, allowing readers to witness events through the eyes of diverse characters, each with their motives and secrets. This technique effectively highlights the central theme of unseen connections and the far-reaching impact of individual decisions. This dystopian narrative is cleverly plotted, brimming with intrigue and unexpected twists.

Olga Markova

The Echoes Beneath by J. M. Ammoun brilliantly blends urban fantasy with social drama. The story unfolds in the city of Midian, divided by the Mantle platform into the luxury of Upper Midian and the slums of Lower Midian. When the long-standing governor of Upper Midian resigns, political unrest sparks in Lower Midian as those in power plot to demolish the Mantle and seize control of Upper Midian. Against this backdrop, we meet Atlas Ramsay, a young orphan from Lower Midian, brought up in an orphanage on the Mantle. Released from the orphanage on his coming of age, Atlas seeks a role among those in power in Lower Midian. What lies ahead for Atlas and the divided city of Midian?

J.M. Ammoun’s The Echoes Beneath is one of the most powerful social dramas I have read recently. It took five years to complete this astounding novel, and the thought given and the care taken to produce it shine in every episode. I liked how the fantasy setting blended with topical social issues. I also liked how the novel explored social divisions, life in the slums, clergy promiscuity, orphan lives, and political hypocrisy and conspiracies. But what impressed me most was how thoroughly and non-judgmentally the characters were developed and exposed to the events, offering readers a lot of food for thought. I highly recommend this amazing novel to fans of thought-provoking fiction focused on social issues. Mature themes, violence, and death make this novel unsuitable for younger readers.

Gabriel Santos

The world has become an apocalyptic wasteland, and people can only seek safety in one of the city-states spread throughout. Midian is a particularly prominent city-state: mighty and prosperous, but only on the surface. Behind the scenes, the city is run by the Syndicate corporations, and there is a large split between those who live in the Uppercity and those who live in the Undercity, unable even to see the sky thanks to the massive Wall surrounding them. The forced retirement of the supposedly most powerful man in Midian, chairman Lutz, shakes the fragile balance between all the intricate moving parts in this city riddled with secrets and conspiracies. This scenario is the starting point of J. M. Ammoun's The Echoes Beneath, a dystopian novel following several characters who struggle with their ambition, inner demons, and sense of purpose as they become entangled in Midian's brewing darkness.

I admit this novel overwhelmed me quite a bit at first, with its large cast of characters and slow buildup, but it was all worth it when the storylines started converging, revealing the big picture. By the time I reached the climax, I couldn't stop reading until the end. J. M. Ammoun excels at sprinkling bits of characterization and worldbuilding throughout dialogue and descriptions, avoiding long stretches of dry "info dump" in favor of subtle exposition. This approach to storytelling and the introspective, psychologically rich narration results in a deep character-driven journey that explores the far-reaching consequences of individual decisions and actions. While requiring a lot of mental energy from the reader early on and featuring mature themes and language, The Echoes Beneath is a must-read for fans of dystopian stories.

Ruffina Oserio

The Echoes Beneath by J.M. Ammoun delivers an intelligently plotted and skillfully accomplished tale that intertwines the lives of several key characters in the city of Midian. Chairman Lutz, a once influential figure, reflects on his forced retirement and the precarious balance in his town as various tensions surface among other key characters. Atlas Ramsay, a former orphan raised in the SyndiCares system, seeks redemption and belonging in the Undercity. His journey is marked by guilt over a tragic incident from his past involving the death of Alanna’s parents during a city parade. Samantha (Sami) Salem, once a devoted member of the Citizenry under Jericho Sands, finds herself in a moral and strategic battle. After Jericho's murder by Bass, the Citizenry leader, Sami, strives to prevent a looming catastrophe between the Syndicate and the Citizenry. Her mission is complicated by internal disputes and personal loss, leading her to seek a new direction for protecting the Undercity’s legacy. Alanna, motivated by past traumas and a sense of justice, works to uplift the people of the Undercity. Her history is closely tied to Atlas’s secret, creating an intense emotional conflict as they struggle with the past and their roles in the ongoing struggle for righteousness. Solomon, Jericho's estranged brother and head of the Faith, views his brother's death and Midian's spiritual state rigidly and unsentimental. Can these characters find a place where there is justice and peace?

The Echoes Beneath by J.M. Ammoun is a dystopian narrative with great potential to entice Hunger Games fans, a story of class struggle against an unforgiving social landscape. The novel explores themes of power, legacy, and rebellion, examining the tensions between a Syndicate's corporate oligarchy and the underrepresented Citizenry. Ammoun's intricate portrayal of political machinations and personal struggles enriches its complexity. The conflict between tradition and change is embodied in the power struggle in Midian. The conflict's complexity intensifies as alliances shift and key characters wrestle with fidelity to their ideals versus pragmatism. The author masterfully portrays this through Chairman Lutz's fight to maintain control, juxtaposed with Sami Salem's burgeoning rebellion against corruption. Through Lutz’s farewell and Sami’s journey, the story critiques the compromises power entails and the enduring struggle for justice. Characterization is stellar. The multifaceted characters bring the political and personal stakes to life. Lutz epitomizes a tarnished legacy, exemplifying the institutional decay that haunts Midian. Contrastingly, Sami emerges as a force of change, her determination to unearth truth and foster liberty elevating her above her predecessors. Atlas, a former guardian struggling with his past, and the enigmatic Alanna provide additional depth to the story. This novel is cinematic, a tautly written literary creation for dystopian fans.

K.C. Finn

The Echoes Beneath by J. M. Ammoun is a complex and compelling dystopian narrative set in the city-state of Midian, a society sharply divided by the Mantle into distinct social strata. The novel intricately follows four interconnected lives, each wrestling with personal struggles that reflect the broader societal tensions. Atlas Ramsay seeks redemption, Samantha Salem fights to stabilize political power, Arvin is consumed by a quest for revenge stemming from a tragic loss, and Solomon Sands grapples with waning faith and consuming jealousy. As their individual stories gradually converge, a dangerous conspiracy threatens to shatter Midian's already fragile social balance. Ammoun creates a rich, multilayered world that serves as a profound exploration of power dynamics, personal ambition, and the moral compromises individuals make when confronted with systemic oppression.

Author J. M. Ammoun demonstrates extraordinary skill in crafting a narrative that is simultaneously intimate and expansive, and the impressive weaving of multiple character perspectives into a single story that is cohesive and compelling. I was particularly struck by the commentary on social inequalities, creating a narrative that feels both specific to the four central characters, and universally relevant to the real world beyond their dystopian nightmare. The characters are multidimensional, their personal struggles reflecting and illuminating the complex societal conflicts of Midian. My personal favorite was Solomon who had a lot of sharp edges and darker urges to battle. Ammoun's prose is elegant and precise, creating an atmospheric depiction of a dystopian world that feels uncomfortable and vivid, while the moral ambiguity of the dialogue and situations really challenges readers to confront difficult ethical questions. Each character's journey is crafted with remarkable psychological depth, revealing the intricate ways personal choices ripple through social structures via the detailed narration of their thoughts, actions, and conversations. Overall, I would wholeheartedly recommend The Echoes Beneath as a profound and thought-provoking exploration of power, redemption, and the way we all have the capacity for destruction and transformation within us.